Let There be Light

"Not thou mine...."
Loved that line..man!...you Ranchi Lc-ites seem to be pros in writing JUST the right ending lines =P
Goood one ! :))
(PS_same here..got the block too..even I posted an old story,but with a new ending :D)

for the first time ever my blogroll showed urs as updated :P

and wow i find a masterpiece *claps* :)

Same here as princess says
:)
Ur Updates r now visible to all Blogrolls
:)
And a beautiful poem
:)
Loved every line
:)
And Adore the ending line
:)

thats indeed a masterpiece! loved not each line but each single word :)

u call this writers block....come on....that was so beautiful

n u call me talented??? :O :O
m nothin compared to u!!!

that ws jus wow!!!

ps: smthn for ya on my 100th post...chk it out :)

haan .. i have read this. mast hai!

wishing you a speedy recovery..! :)

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loveliest lines I read today...ahhh!!

hello ji...doc forbade me to cum onlyn but m still here! :P

but d post was so long that i cudnt read it..will read it once my new specs cum okie..tc ji :)

wishing to get drowned inside your words.

every line is so deep n beautiful!
really a masterpiece!

@crystal ...looks like with winter mein nose block ke sath dimag block bhi ho gaya :D

@ div *bows*..n its all thanx 2 sid

@ sid? wats spl about the last line?
n thanku so much for dat suggestion
@lena thhhhhhhhhhhhhankuuuuuuuuuuuuu

@princess...block as in i have gone blockheaded :D
@mayank..c'mon u know dats not true

@hp ..haan filhaal im in d bed with a writr's block
@ harmony..really i get suprised too...shock kind of surprise ;)

@mohan ..i can hardly decide which of these to add :P
@priya thanchu

@tinni..gud..i was so jealous u cud get away widout wearin ur specs
@neha doob jao darling

@digant ..thnks a lot

Oye I edited the post..
Poora doosra matter laga dia..come check!

by far thye best post :-)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. n there was light.. hurrrrrrrrrrray!

loved the romance in those liness... n that sheer beauty!
:D

IT TRULY IS A PLEASURE and a treasure to be someone else's..
I had goosebumps here:
"Enthralled, bedazzled, enraptured I stared And offered you my trembling heart,"Not thou mine, but I thine."

n it truly feeles like heaven when you finally get to live with any kind of beauty: immortal, soul-like, material or physical..
:)
love the way 'venus palls' n the way ya get those nuding idle feet tickle our senses!!

Love it!!

Wow!That's simply awesome dear.You write so well :)

As I have said b4 too, you do a wonderful job of descriptions! and I could appreciate the scene although I'm kinda more of a human-abstract-feeling sorta person(i believe in expressing the feelings nd beliefs which make the person believe in tht art :) )
"Beauty that rivals art"?
But beauty(originality,harmony with nature nd self) is a measure of art :p
"Not thou mine, but I thine." Well,lol, this is where you got philosophy in b/w again...
One must believe in mutual love and a conditional, which is not taken for granted.
“Truth is beauty and beauty is truth”...I start finding things a bit agitating when they do not fit the truth... :)
Anyway, it was dazzlingly ornate :)

@crystal..right away
@rakesh..where had u vanished

@jane..luv it wen some1 reads a post that deeply :)
@shy thanks :)

@sameera..thanx..n plz enable comments on ur blog yaar
@ayushi heroine hum dono itna alag sochte hain ..aur tum bohot zyada sochti ho..how do u get all those ideas even?

hey blogging spree! u on a bloggin spree? and yeh hemant karkare dying was sooo sad. and now states sent fbi team and now uk is gonna send mi6 team too

loved it completely... beautiful absolutly... sorry this is the poetry i can manage :)

good one... u should consider writing a poetry book

excellent, your poem is really good.

powerful one this..powerful..

On the crags sat I, in wishful dream

As drunken as in sleep

While the lapping water whispered me

The secrets of the deep.


I loved it.. I will most certainly quote you when I am at the beach next time

hey! Wen shall this writer block end??
Guess wat, I just got over it to discover you sufferin' from it :|

@post:
Nice! :-) May be this is why even after so much troubles, loVe is said to be the most b'ful. You have rightly showed the essence, 'nd hey,
"Not thou mine, but I thine."
Nice 1 :-)

wow how beautiful is this!

to be honest, Im still on a break...but I posted today...yet Im not bak :) I dunno if I'll ever be bak the way I was before..

TC HUGS!

Keshi.

The first 5 lines
"I have already posted this poem.......happy post"
were so beautiful and touching!

(Wait now let me go and read the rest of the poem ;) )

Beatiful!

Funny in a way, coming from a girl. But then a guy would not have been able to describe so beautifully perhaps.

(I guess you are compesating for Kailash Kher by restoring balance in ths world where he, the guy, sang "Teri Deewani".)

Anyways I've kinda lost touch with my finer emotions long long back. I am simply reptilian these days. Make that these years.

I feel dumb reading things like these :P

That's some very beautiful pro's describing the statement "I went swimming"

Nicely written!

that's a wonderful poem..
this made me make a wish.. :)

@ santoshi ..thanx gal
@lash ..tell me wen u do ..ill write it in my dairy..ill hav 2 create one of course

@sach...i almost got ovr it ..den these blasts came
@keshi..no keshi ..not u too :(

@tujhe koi distant connection nikalna zaroori hai na unelated cheezon mein?

@ mike..lol ..i'm a lousy swimmer
@saurabh ..aha? wat wish?

farah, i was thinking of u last evening :P good that ur back :)

collect ur gift from www.thedumbigang.blogspot.com

:) just a small token of love :)

Lovely yaar.. sahi description hai.. b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l :)

Btw, you have been tagged..

That was a splendid work. Almost as if archaic. Like the last line.

TT dun worry...Im here...but quite slow and infrequent. My mood is gone to the wilderness again. I wanted to come bak all happy n with lotsa pics for all of u. But Mumbai attacks hv left me lifeless and numb. When will hatred ever end?


Keshi.

my wish.. to meet her asap..

ahem ahem..

Hellooooooooooooooooooozzzzzzz, Y2A here!

Lovely poem..! Post it again please! :P


Sorry for not commenting on rest of the posts..! beat me please if you can..!

You have an award on my blog the one you have on your blog roll!!!


Oh and ummm! Your writing is Beautiful!! I want moreeeeeeeee! lol

Ne

had my exams goin on ya...just got done with it on wed...abhi me free :)

writer's block you say?

youre wrong.


I say...

















Im hungry.

oh.

what was I talking about?

yeah.
food.


oh.

date.

Me heroine?..ahem ahem..thankyouu! :D
Btw..why ain't you updating behnaa?..time ho chala bahoot sara!

//@tujhe koi distant connection nikalna zaroori hai na unelated cheezon mein?

Was that to me?

Tuney mera astitva hi mita diya :P

Or maybe I became the vaccum before the comment. Oh wait its called silence before the storm isn't it?

gr8 work

everytime i read sumthin from u i feel lik