Let There be Light

1st to comment. Yayy.. Now lemme read the post..

haha..read read

Loved the To my son waala para..

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i have been cryin since mrng...cant take it anymore

oh loved d post btw

arey ..y hav u been crying

@urv ..han daughter ke saath thoda discrimination ho gaya :(

:'( :'( :'(

faraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...i already hv exams! stop depressing me more... write happy plz!

@mayz..stop crying! it causes dehydration..

Hi u like my art works!? well i do it with the help of photoshop.

was that real?

because if it WAS then....


spooky

and medically untrue

oh.

and regards your comment on my last post.

date. definitely.
gimme your number.

when are you free?

:P

well very imaginative and well narrated !

@deluded..fiction hay yaar..n waise bhi it was in reference to avery recent case where the lady wasn't allowed an abortion..thank god she had a miscarriage..and this woman of the story is about to commit suicide.

@peter..thanx :)

hmm great Post dear!Shaked and toched deeply!do we alwys remain like tht!need to change now!take care!

really touching!

Very nice yaar.I had goosebumps.
Now return to your sense of humor.
Cant take any more sadness...

The situation's surely interesting (reminds me of a similar recent event).

The flow: umm, dunno why I feel there's something missing. Maybe fear, or the extremism in the act?

In any case, this was poignant.

sad.. it was sad.. neat.. such strong words.. when i read the last line, i understood the pain with which this mail would have been written...

if only this was a real letter, i could nt imagine such situation.. poor lady.. who ever she is...

Hmm...you haven't told us the exact desperacy of the emotional(?) situation...a reason like "was not allowed to abort a foetus, which , if it came to this world would live a life worse than death" looks kinda incomplete to me.
Cuz doesn't she realise: that her dying could probably mean much worse for her existing family...

I will feel sad only when I feel her helplessness and the reason is important(something which I will be highlighting in my next post :p, incase the reaosn wasnt enough, the emotions should have been highlighted...I am feeling an anger instead...

However much it was, it was done up nicely :D
I'm sure I could have been reduced to tears had I a more emotionally empathetic outlook!

@harmony v hav a v cant chng prob
@digant thanx :)

@abhi..tinni will tell u i hav none
@alok..i luv dis ..so many people feel so many diff things about the same situation..well dis lady now is well past fear or anger or anything(in my mind)... she is just waiting to let go

@Chriz ..its ok Chriz ..just my imagination
@Ayushi...whatever u do make sure u post ...as for ur answer read my ans to alok's comment ..i think those living would make it..but to doom one's old child to ages of pain ..i don't think a mother could do it ..numb hai yaar ..sab numb

How the hel did I miss this !

Duh! :(
I tell you...I loved it!
I mean..kya concept tha!
if the child would have read abt the crulities offered to a girlchild she wouldn't want to come in the world..

But WOW..nice one. :)

very nice farah!! :D ur comparisons are great...!! virgin paper?? weirdly interesting!!

loved the letter...very creeative!

vinay.

ps: mail it to me?? ok cool...
its co.uk actually since i was in england when i created it!! :)

Lovely Post...Think Tank :)

i had to read the comments as a hint, if it was true or not. so, now you know, you wrote it extremely well! lol

felt sorry for the unborn foetus & the youngest daughter , coz they couldn't even experience the wonder called mother's love. but the son's will miss her more , knowing that she would not be there for them anymore.

ps= i forgot it was fiction.

That was an unexpected ending that left me surprised.

The description was wonderful.. i could feel some of her motherly feelings through your words, how she must have felt...

the ending is.. saddening...

great post dear! :)

this is called talent re..u wrote so very well..ahh beautiful flow of emotions..

@crystal i know - one more reason to stop population growth
@vinay u shud know by now..i was born wierd...n i c u r finall on the fuellers list ..so u wont b bodered my mails :)

@ toon thanks :)
@ noelia - backhanded compliments? ill take dem neway :)

@i'll try ...y though? everything i write is fiction ..no personal stuf yaar ..
@mehreen ...most of life is sad..as hardy said .i forgot his xact words ..lol :D

@pj thanku ...muaaah

ok, so that ends the family!

great post

sigh ....
this, again, is awesome... i dunno what to write for this. but if u ever stop writing .....!!

PS: there's something wrong with your feeds. mera blogroll update nai hua.. thats why the delay. so i've u've removed my id from the mail notification thingy, put it back.
tata !

Thats a very sad post you made me read. . .
Sniff.
Sob
:(:(:( :(:(:( :( :( :(

@div..i think it saves it..tho it loses alot
@sagari thanx :)

@hp ..u decide on one thing ..dats a problem wid lots of blogrolls now :(
@sid stop sniffffin

Farah, Thanks a lot for ur honest comment. The problem with me is that I can make art works in minutes, but I am very bad in writting a post. There are many topics on which I feel like writting, but I neglect writting because I am not good in writting. You actually weave words in your post. You and many others here are so good, U people write like proffessionals. I am so afraid of writting that I think twice even to leave a comment.

this is fiction no? of course not real...

powerfully packed...

Yay!
I'm on d fueller's list
:)
25th too
:)
And hp is right. There is a problem with ur Blog.
Its easy to rectify if my guess is right
:)
In settings of ur Blog, if you have disabled RSS feed subscription ability, this can happen. Check and get back to me
:)

it is always a pleasure to read your prose, dear! you are damn talented, really. Not many can express emotions and pain and frustration the way that they seem real. You can.

I only want to see how you can express positive emotions, would be really great to read something happy :)

@santoshi don't worry dear ..u don't have to write stories or nething..just ne normal stuff in the usual language ...:)

@kiran..yes its fiction...don't worry
@deeps..thanx :)

@sid..its enbled yaar ..i dunno wat to do :(
@lena ...luv u ..btw y can't i comment on sameera's post? ne idea? n did u get the dumbigang dedication?

u have a nice blog
pls make a visit on my blog...
http://shayrionline.blogspot.com/

thank you

One more way to show that you're mentally stunted !

that was pretty....scary...I am lost for words...

Scribblers Inc.

Why such pensive posts my dear?

Beautifully etched.Keep it up!

P.S. Thanks a lot for the concern when I was away.How are you sweetie? :)

dumbi sameera disabledв comments for a while :D
and yes, we got the dedication, thanks, sweetheart! :)

What is this?

She kills herself because killing 'just the baby' (abortion) was not allowed 'by law'?

If she is so bothered about 'the law', isn't she aware that suicide is also a crime 'by law'?

And which is worse?
1) A child disabled and underdeveloped having to live and later finding that its special in so many ways (Yeah Reader's digest has lot of charming stories about how people miserable physically/mentally lived a wonderful life and brought special meaning to lives of those they touched)
2) Suicide, bringing sureshot misery to rest of the family?

Anyways about the recent incident that happened, I wonder if it was a real miscarriage, or they found a nice way to 'work around' the judgement and do what they wanted to do anyways?

Well seeing the complications of the case (Considerably older mother, special condition of the baby, stress of courts, publicity, etc.) its not hard to beleive that it was a miscarriage, but ah there is an ever the cynical side to me too, always nagging at a corner.

arey bhai story hain

Par main character key sar mein chemical locha lagta hai

Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
I've been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!

Thumbs up, and keep it going!

Cheers
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